Sorry for the quiet week. I know I've been neglecting my account as of late. Sorry about that. My work schedule has been a bit hectic. I had a bit of problem for awhile- adjusting... surviving. But thankfully it's over. I've been recovering at home- hoping to god they don't require this much work again any time soon. 12 hour shifts with little to no breaks in between is not fun. I think I am looking forward to a desk job if I can ever nab one.
I was going to do a comic this Friday but never got around to it. I know, I've been lazy. Bad me.
I'll try to get back to you on that comic sometime later.
by Gail Carson Levine.
4 out of 5.
It was pretty good. A nice interpretation of Snow White. I really liked to ties to
. The world was well imagined. I never quite knew what was going to happen- save from some small guesses. And I did like the message that was given at the end. Well imagined. Well executed. Much better than
had been.
.
].

Ashachu To The Rescue

"That was great Pikachu! You really creamed James!" Ash laughed. They were running through the woods hoping to find Misty and Brock.
"You weren't so bad yourself! Did you see the look on Jessie's face when you slammed the door of the cage into her face? Pikachu laughed. "I've never laughed so hard." [
Watching people wither in pain is funny!]
"Do you have the Transformer [
Optimus Prime?] thing?" Ash asked Pikachu. [
"Oh crap. I knew there was something I forgot!"]
"Of corse I do. Now we need find Misty and Brock so they can change you back." Pikachu said as he ran.
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"Hey! Our secert weapon is gone! Those Pikachu must have it!" [
Nah. You think?] Jessie hissed.
"That means Ash and Pikachu will be looking for us! [
Or for a trigger happy trainer that has no qualms shooting a few pikachu with a strange looking weapon] They can't pull the trigger themselves!" [
Unless they get tips from the Pikachu in Super Smash Brothers.] Misty said. "Come on Brock!"
Brock and Misty started to run through the dense forest.
"Hey! They are going to get
our pikachu! Come on! We have to stop them!" Meowth yelled to the rest of Team Rocket that was still searching the bushes. [
But shouldn't they keep looking in the bushes? I mean... it was never officially established that they weren't there.]
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"I don't see them anywhere! Ash panited all out of breath. "Maybe Team Rocket lied and turned them into a pokemon." [
Oh my god. That'd be a first. Team Rocket lying? Who would have thunk?]
"It wouldn't surprize me." Pikachu answered. [
Nothing would surprise you, Pikachu. I still expect you to be chatting with that log sometime in the future.]
Ash ears picked up a sound.
"Ash... Pikachu... Where... are... you?" [
Apparently Misty and Brock are shouting for them very slowly.]
"I think I hear them, Pikachu!" Ash shouted happily.
"Me too!" Pikachu agreed.
"We are over here!" Ash and Pikachu yelled together. [
Because there's absolutely no chance that some one like... iunno- someone like Team Rocket could hear them too. That's just inconceivable!]
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"Pika, Pika, Chu!"
"I heard them Brock. They are over here!" Misty yelled happily to Brock.
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"I hear them! They are right over there!" Ash yelled to Pikachu. [
How long are we going to keep this up?]
Pikachu didn't feel quite right. "I don't think that's them." Pikachu said unsure of what he was saying. [
Don't worry Pikachu. It's called foreshadowing. I had to force it in somehow. ]
"What are you kidding? Of corse that's them!" Ash said.
[
Next time on Ashachu To The Rescue, Ash and Misty continue to have a shouting match across the forest. Eventually they reach a clearing where they'll run towards each other shouting the other's name but never quite reach each other. "Chosen One!" "I'm coming!" "Chosen One!" "I'm coming!" Meanwhile Brock is maimed by a man named Betty to the song Baby's got Back. If you didn't get the joke. Don't worry, the finale of this story is coming next time- thank god.]

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